I loved that side comment:
"...so the shells don't fall in the car. It's a very nice car."
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Hmm....
Needs more cowbell.
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MOAR METAPHORS PLS.
And couldn't you have at least waited one damn chapter before popping out the guns? Jesus, this is going to be like 10 chapters of joe enemies getting whacked, isn't it?
Also, more girls. Hot flirty ones. With boobies. JIGGLY boobies.
Overuse of metaphors is a valid critisism. I'll work on that.
This story will not be pure shoot 'em up. This fight at the start was to set up all the who's shooting at them and why spy goodness.
As for the third part, I will not dissapoint
*claps hands*
My only criticism is that I usually wear a black and white flannel coat. Yellow is not a good color on me. ;-D
Asking your winter coat prefrence might have tipped you off. And then if I didn't use it it would just be creepy
useless henchmen.
Is it pushing it too far asking for a "Rick Deckard" style trenchcoat for me?
<a href="http://www.abbyshot.com/products/ps-deckard-trench.php">http://www.abbyshot.com/products/ps-d eckard-trench.php</a>
<a href="http://www.filmjackets.com/FEATURES/feature_BladeRunner2.htm">http://www.filmjackets.com/FEATURES/f eature_BladeRunner2.htm</a>
Pl0x?
Dosen't sound too hard to work in. And if anyone else from the lounge wants in say so before I write the big at base scene.
You need to make a Christmas special.
Anyway, merry you-know-what!
I second the request for boobies.
They're coming, right now
DarkWizard1992
It.
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Mah.
World.